Готовый перевод Его не звали, но он приперся / They never called, yet he is here: PWP_Q

Questions about PWP

Q: Why even put in the tags pwp if it is not visible and who knows when it will even if there will be. Especially since pwp is "sex-centric" fanfic.((((

A: *waving his hands.*

I somehow always get this way, despite my best efforts. I planned to start PWP in the third chapter, but the dice rolled the other thing. And then roll after roll and it's all missed.

Such a case.

Q: I suspect that the author is interested in writing under this tag because it gives an additional degree of freedom. If someone writes to Avada, that the fic plot is slanted crooked, the characters cardboard, and he doesn't master the language at all, and at the same time correctly justifies, giving examples and thoroughly painted as it should be, the author is not upset, but just say that from the hut wanker should not expect the architecture of the palace.

PWP as a tag reduces the moral burden on authors. True, and authors need to remember to give the tag credit in the work as well.

A: That's a good idea, though!

In all seriousness, PWP should have started in the second or at least the third chapter.

It' doesn't work.

Q: Slowly slipping into L&M? (This is a different work by the Author, who is much more enthused with PWP.)

A: A long time ago! It should have slipped a long time ago, but for some reason it hasn't! Hentai was supposed to start in the third fucking chapter! Chapter three! It's now (at the time of writing this reply) thirtieth and there's been one and a half erotic scenes, and that's not for the MC!!!!

I don't know what to do anymore! Should I slightly correct the will of the dice?

Q: You want to assure us that he, with a bunch of bonuses, has never once rolled something good on the NC scene?!

A: Don't you think about the fact that I keep bonuses and saves for really critical and dangerous situations? The kind that would be more important than fucking out another twat? And without bonuses, Kostik is surprisingly unlucky in that regard, that's all.

Q: Well, given that the MC himself was not against it, but things got in the way, then when the MC will be rolled out crits for sex, then maybe he will get the title, but of his own free will =)

A: I'm beginning to lose hope, and so is Ygra. And her addiction is getting worse and worse. I don't know what else to say.

Q: Kostya can get an hour's sleep and rest completely. So, if the Author wanted, he could do a marathon every night. And not to excuse himself with fatigue.

A: Here's what you don't take into account - in order to throw rolls for sex every hour, the situation must be suitable for

Kostik doesn't think about sex alone. And it's not every hour when the mood strikes, either.

Plus training, after which neither he nor, especially, Taria was interested in love.

Plus alchemy.

Plus just a crappy mood - that leaves very few moments.

And when the mood is there, some shit happens.

It's actually not funny to me that Kostik is so unlucky, but so far I haven't tweaked his rolls yet.

If the "character creation" had resulted in increased perversity for Kostik, he would still be having fun on the swamp with Ygra (not that it can't happen, because we remember the effects of the ring).

Just accept the fact that the author not only needs to write PWP but also to move the plot. There are only a limited number of rolls for something in a chapter, and not every chapter has time for a roll for sex.

At the same Ostmark was supposed to be a real feast of love, but the MC only had time to get acquainted with that girl, as he had to run.

In the Kraj, he pumped alchemy and dreamwork, fought the bureaucracy (after which there was no energy left for anything else), and then he fought the cult as well.

Q: I'm applying to ban all kinds of perverts trying to turn a good work into a hentai trash.

A: Since this work was originally intended to be a hentai trash, I'll be first in the queue for the ban...

Q: And yet this work is sorely lacking any pornography. Just the kind of porno that makes you you really hard on.

A: You have no idea how much I agree with you...

Q: But if you want: It's not even PWP that's the problem, it's the way you describe it. The PWP appears, and most of the chapter goes for it, reducing the useful text to almost nothing.

A: *laughs hysterically*

Do you even know that the whole fucking thing was supposed to be 70+ pages of pure hentai, about how MC uses the ring to fuck local chicks?

And now, when I finally get on the line with PWP, they tell me not to post it. "Nah, that's really kinky!" (с)

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