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Проголосовал за ваш вариант. Спасибо.

Убрал кавычки. Спасибо. Голос прибран.
Не вижу упамянутой вами проблемы в своем варианте:
The statement «disproving» the facts ... mentioned by the President of Russia V. Putin

Что на мой взгляд не точно в вашем варианте:
* note => statement (но это не так принципиально)
* «startles not as much by rude twisting of reality as by cynicism and blatant »double standards«.» не звучит в даном контексте. Вариант «is shocking ...», предложенный LilaH лучше

Буду рад проголосовать за ваш вариант если вы внесете изменения. Также думаю native speaker review очень важно.

mishkiss, вы правы. туплю. щяс предложу свой перевод.

LilaH твоя версия лучше, но она не передает всей сути.

Если вы хотите оставить свой вариант перевода, надо его не комментах оставлять, а пользоваться стрелочкой «вправо» (которая между англ и русским текстами)

Let us quote the famous author of one dystopian novel:

We will not make any conclusions by our site's convention. But please note that Russian embassy's address in Ireland is the following one: 184-186 Orwell Road, Rathgar, Dublin 14

The same actions, performed by Ukrainian citizen, who has access to a state secret are subject of a punishment by an imprisonment for a period between 7 and 10 years.

And now let's confirm an upper limit which equals 10 years. From the draft bill:

The same actions, performed by Ukrainian citizen, who used his/her voting right in Ukraine are subjects of a punishment by an imprisonment for a period between 3 and 5 years.

Let's take a look at the bottom limit of a penal responsibility – 3 years. From the draft bill:

Let's stand here for a second and check a size of a non-taxable minimum income. According to point 5 of chapter XX of transitional provisions of Ukrainian Tax Code, a non-taxable minimum income equals 17 ukrainian hryvnyas. It is a little bit less than 170 american dollars or 6100 russian roubles.

And now let's take a look at the draft bill.

Hold on for a second. Let's take a look at original news first.

We could finish our investigation here, but it's way more interesting to dig deeper. So let's open the draft bill and take a look at its regulations.

So, let’s visit the website of the Verkhovna Rada and look for the corresponding draft bill. Here it is the headline:

Verkhovna Rada will examine a draft bill regarding criminal responsibility for holding a multiple citizenship after a stabilization of the situation in the country. A law, which leads to 10-years' imprisonment for holding a multiple citizenship, has already been introduced to Parliament.

Dear 644 million of people in more than 100 countries! Unfortunately we have to inform you that in this case you have been deceived. We will not reflect over the reasons, we will just demonstrate why this information is false.

We came across one piece of news from channel «Russia today» that has an audience of more than 644 million people in more than 100 countries (according to the information from the channel itself). This news concerns the fact that «Verkhovna Rada will introduce criminal responsibility for holding multiple citizenship».

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