Настучать в бубен / Hit the tambourine: Эпилог авторский комент

Evil thieves stole my last chance at the first comment. I'll go cry. Just throw out the dice. :(

Camrad_RIP 14.05.25 в 11:04

So, this moment has come, and the first volume of my SHORT LITTLE OMAK FANFIC on SHORT PLOTLESS HENTAI ABOUT AN ELF AND GOBLINS is finished. I can't even believe it.

Camrad_RIP 14.05.25 в 11:05

I won't go into detail, there were a lot of dice, but there weren't any special crits, there were almost no pure crits or anti-crits, even the dirty ones were mostly self-evident and not important to the plot.

Camrad_RIP 14.05.25 в 11:07

As is already clear, the basis of the epilogue plot is in the view of the MC's activities (or the MC himself) from the outside, with the exception of a micro-remark about the adventures of Flagman Paklava Oglafson in the glorious city of Morgraf.

Camrad_RIP 14.05.25 в 11:08

1. The conversation between de Fell and Herbert. It all went smoothly, most of the throwaways were done in the last chapter, and the epilogue simply showed the results of that sorting out. As can be seen, most of the secrets were kept not by Pann himself, but by the impact of Her Milfness. The lurkers were left to pick up the crumbs. The greatest success, if it can be considered so, was the opportunity to hear a joke-phrase from Stepan.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 15:55

Yes, this world has the Master of the Depths, who is Dagon, so I reckoned that I knew the name of the Black Goat with a Thousand Minor in this world as well. Unlike the deep god, this particular entity is all but forgotten in this world. The cultists have died out or degenerated almost completely, but who knows what exactly still remains to dwell in the deepest corners of the distant thickets. And maybe the hentai world still holds orgies in glory.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 15:56

Otherwise, in this fragment, only conclusions about the location of MC's lair are important, which was calculated correctly and will now be searched for. The method of hiding, alas, has not been guessed, assuming just hiding at a particularly deep depth, while the search should have been in the principles of Lortan temples, but it is forgivable. The guys have too little data.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 15:57

Shown are the moments with those flashes, which still gave MC. Yes, he was hiding and disguising them, each (not a single kritproval and even just a sure failure was avoided, the closest was 43 on disguise during the escape from the worm room) could be taken for some fluctuation, each. That said, smart people, who both Fell and Dantrel are, were not happy about this amount of coincidences and did not consider them coincidences.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 15:58

2. The acquaintance with the group of Heather also took place (they had a critical success on the wire, exactly Herbert and Allizira, quite cool even for elves), and it will not be the last. In glorious Dantmark, they'll be acting as Twilight, digging into the mysteries little by little and picking up the trail of MC. Twilight, alas, is on another project, or else they would have sent him too, as he already has experience in confronting secret societies led by the systemists. Well, they're still keeping another systems guy, swearing audibly in the process, so they don't care.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 16:02

The group's composition and rolling out their "builds" was the most problematic part of this fragment, but I rolled it.

Camrad_RIP 18.05.25 в 13:01

3. Fate of Draga and Selendina. I've been thinking for a very long time about how MC would have chosen to deal with these individuals, but the final idea sounds pretty okay to me. Because yes, it's the not doing anything that is the most shameful and embarrassing for both.... well, if they're brought to their senses, because right now they don't think so. And yes, it was very fortunate for Selendina that he didn't pry too deeply into the darkness of centuries of her memory, especially the part of it hidden by oaths and wiped out by voluntary amnesia. He would have. Almost guaranteed he would. An agent of her experience and level simply could not do without THIS vat of shit of all sorts and levels of flavour.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 16:05

4. Greetings. The first of the not brainwashed and voluntarily entered into co-operation with MC personalities, her unrivalled magicality with a very long and glorious pedigree - Yula. The girl is distrustful, battered by life, not particularly burdened with manners and only slightly burdened with morals, yet not the worst representative of humanity. She also has an inherited five-room flat in the centre of the capital... Well, it's more like she has a hereditary capital city centre, including arsenals, nuclear power plants and the government building, but you just have to get there.
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Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 16:07

She's on very genuinely good terms with the hero, but her full trust will still have to be earned. The fact that the hero didn't hide much of his secrets from her, including ‘the nature and antics of Her Milfness played, oddly enough, into his hands. Yes, scary, but also honest. And yes, he wasn't shy about taking some cross vows from Yula about careful handling of tokens.... The question is, will these oaths work on meta-actions, or prove blind to such? Big, very big question, but Her Milfness wouldn't set him up like that, would she?

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 16:09

Well, at least until Yula turns eighteen, it won't be, that's a fact. :)

Camrad_RIP 18.05.25 в 13:01

5. Singhi's reaction is the biggest fun of the entire epilogue. I honestly rewrote the episode several times, trying to get a better rendition of her reaction, but given the character and depth of their relationship already shown, this was the most logical outcome. The girl was literally crushed, eaten and torn to pieces by the realisation of what a ‘fucking horse’ she was, that she had so set up, cheated and betrayed the one who had done her nothing but good, an allusion to the Reverend Aurora's attitude to brainiacs, described by Brynar, by the way, and here it's just a mirror situation.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 16:10

At the same time, everything ended well for her and MC (as she thinks, not knowing about Oglafovna yet), and she can relieve some of the guilt. Yes, even though it is very strange from the outside, but she is sincerely grateful to both MC and that unknown bitch scum.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 16:12

Although it is shameful, of course, and pleasant, she would certainly like to repeat, only without all the brainwashing, but she certainly will not say it aloud, even in her thoughts will not say, and in general, does not need such hints here.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 16:13

Her parents' reactions were much more detailed, but they were much harder to write. General throws were about 70+, because the GG has a very high credit of trust, and he asks not only a little. He asks for ‘almost nothing’ by their standards. In fact, it is the modesty of his requests - this is what confuses them the most, as well as the desire to necessarily personally take VERY reliable vows of silence. They suspect mischief, ambush, and trap, but not the Master - a completely different type of aura and magical technique.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 16:16

Well, yes - as Maega said honestly, if her daughter's savior came face to face with her, she would rise to his aid under almost any circumstances and would not hesitate much. She knows gratitude. She knows honor too.

Camrad_RIP 18.05.25 в 13:04

Bu-u-u-t...

Camrad_RIP 14.05.25 в 11:09

Singha had not told her mother about the tokens, nor about her possession of the token and its properties, for a reason. Because if Maega had known the whole background, she would have used the token on Stepan. She herself would brainwash her daughter, instill all the necessary things, blow with the wind, and would let a stranger come to meet her in person to lick the steppe feet. And afterwards would have... interrogated - this is a hundred per cent of a hundred, he would tell her everything, first of all, about whether something bad wishes her home and whether he is not planning something bad.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:02

If she found out about the presence of a Mark on herself, which MC did not use and would not even think of using, she would, of course, be ashamed in every possible way. But at the same time, she would have made sure that MC would forget about Mark and would not even think of using it. And yes, she would have been very, very ashamed, but she is not young and soft-hearted Singha and would have preferred to suffer shame in complete safety rather than live with such a ‘curse’ behind her back. To her credit, she wouldn't have thought of radically getting rid of the threat and not just because of the benefits of the alliance.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:04

Whether or not she would have made Stepan the perfect husband for her daughter is more of a question. There were 50/50 rolls, so to speak. She could have pressed, she could have decided to have a second super-gifted child, and she could have remembered about honour and gratitude, though she is a cynical bitch, like any gifted person of her level, but not to the point of outright bestiality. And she loves her husband quite sincerely.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:06

Something like that.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:06

Anyway, Singha is a smart girl and knows her mummy well, so MC should be thanking her, but he just won't know it (well, or will see scenes in his dream-omake of how their negotiations would have gone under different circumstances, ha).

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:10

Maega, too, should be grateful to her daughter. As in the dream-omake about Cyrill the Artefactor, eventually Her Milfness would remove control from Stepan, and he would not be happy about Maega's actions at all.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:12

6. The first quest of twenty-one has already been completed, the rewards are quite good (including also two free points of small knowledge, which MC did not say out loud, but not of secret, just to the place did not have to). And, please note, Her Milfness was very diligent in choosing a target for Stepan-chan, just such a bright brown personality that he had to overpower himself not to wash the brains of the cow that had done nothing to him, but not to kill it on the spot. The prey must not be let off the hook!

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:15

By the way: on Gmoona, MC used not only the usual mago-shaman-witchcraft, but also tokens, speeding up and simplifying his work. Her Milfness did not object, but approved.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:16

In the same chapter, MC has more artefacts - a Bell for the renamed (part of the assignment, not MC's prank, which is obvious - he's not into such pranks) Gmoona, as well as bracelets torn from his heart. In the sense that he could, from the option ‘any super-elite artefact with pre-defined parameters’, make himself such a delicious thing that just tears to the eyes. But no, instead of a battle tambourine with a host of two or three bound higher-ups and a couple of dozen older ones, he gave his new student some awesome bracelets. Well, at the very least, she wouldn't have to be afraid of her curse, it would soon stop hurting and requiring anaesthesia, and a few more levels up would start forging it into a weapon.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:28

And yes, whether it's Reistar's ashes knocking at her heart, or just a bad temper, but Yula disliked gods for some reason.... I don't even know why.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:28

7. Tahira... I was almost sure that MC would use one more slot in the group, but the backstory and the character's character had their say. She loves not power and magic, but the river and ships, she just doesn't give a fuck about everything else, she doesn't try to climb higher at any cost. Such an uncharacteristic magician. And she would have gone anyway, without pretence or hidden resentment, she wasn't lying, she would have followed Stepan, followed him and gradually, maybe, she would have gotten the taste for it.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:34

But MC turned out to be too sensitive to his misfortune and did not want, quite reasonably, however, to keep with himself the one who was not particularly eager for it. And they separated as ships in Dantra, after being gifted with characteristics and properties. MC will now have his own agent of influence on the river, as well as someone who can, for example, deliver a couple of boxes to Morgrave and leave them in some deep corner. To make it easier for MC to teleport later.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:40

Tahira's opinion about who she works for is the reason for Stepan's hysterics. It would be more ironic only if Tahira actually met Master, somehow miraculously remaining with her brains and thanking him sincerely for everything. Well, what else was she supposed to think?

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:43

8. I almost forgot about our sweetheart Miller! That's who threw the most successful krit on diplomacy-social in the epilogue, and for the biggest success of such in the last couple of chapters, he can also argue. Yes, he only needs to buy a little time, and yes, the problem of solving the mice issue will certainly not occupy the honourable Clementine, or rather her retinue, for she will not be doing it herself, for any length of time.

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:44

Anyway, I suspect the honourable de Neirat will have to suckle more than just in bed, yes. Especially savoury will be the explanation of why an almost routine attempt to sell a lucrative deal suddenly turned out to be so brazenly broken. And, most importantly, there's nothing Miller can blame for. He gave fair warning that it wasn't just mice at all, but did she listen to him?

Camrad_RIP 26.05.25 в 17:45

Something like that, that's all.

Camrad_RIP 14.05.25 в 11:09

The first volume is finished.

Camrad_RIP 14.05.25 в 11:09

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Camrad_RIP 14.05.25 в 11:08