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nah, i think it's fine as it is.
thanks a lot!

it's ok – i was thinking if i should put an article here

or: You know well yourself that
I didn't want to become a witch.

how about now?

cheers

i see. what about this: Guys, you will have fun with them. – I think this is more in line with what the charactter says in that episode. how does it sound?

how about the other option i\ve suggested? better?

how peculiar? – in Ukr it is not too strange

oh, damn those articles ((((

cheers! yeah, i'm surprised that there's so little corrections...

and there are 20 or even 30 of them.

is this better?

They hunt quail again – would that be better? can you hunt quail?

he's accompanied by 1 good person; so i\ve changed the way you suggested

it\s a surname, so i\ll skip the articles

well, any super-outdated but still recognisable old swear phrase (funny rather than insulting) will work here; well, preferably dealing with someone's mother, but not compulsory so))

you suggest – unharness the horses?

yeah, you' re right

in this particular case – it sounds like Drach has listened to the stories of other people and has merely written them down. Does 'transcribed by' sound better in this context?

yes, we probably discussed it;
the thing is that all the roles in the titles are described in a way suggesting a bit 'older' language; so, instead of simply 'directed' or 'written by' some other words are used that kind of mean the same but are not used in the context of filmmaking, but rather maybe theater or sth else related to performance... hm... i don\t think i explained it well... maybe like this: for translation to be appropriate, all the titles should sound a bit strange and outdated, yet point out to the activities such as directing, screenplay etc...

yes, you're right: 2 guys are assigned the role