Amazing verse
Me: Look at my verse,
My verse is amazing!
Try it to read.
Zombie: Hmm, It seems just like hazing!
M: I figured out your game,
You are breaking my brain
But I'll stop you again,
Coz you are fool and such silly.
Z: You are silly!
M: Do you think so?
Well I'd better then ask for you, can you whether it translate?
You can't translate.
You can't translate!
You can't translate,
You will never can translate!
Get off my verse,
Your presence here is so adverse
In all the other places too.
Z: I think you'll find that your poesy is made of mistakes and...
M: Shut up zombie fuck off my verse!
My verse is amazing!
Try it to read.
Zombie: Hmm, It seems just like hazing!
M: I figured out your game,
You are breaking my brain
But I'll stop you again,
Coz you are fool and such silly.
Z: You are silly!
M: Do you think so?
Well I'd better then ask for you, can you whether it translate?
You can't translate.
You can't translate!
You can't translate,
You will never can translate!
Get off my verse,
Your presence here is so adverse
In all the other places too.
Z: I think you'll find that your poesy is made of mistakes and...
M: Shut up zombie fuck off my verse!
>Try it to read.
У вас дополнение не туда убежало.
>Zombie: Hmm, It seems just like hazing!
Подозреваю, что тут отглагольное существительное, а не герундий, тогда нужен артикль. NY Times всем тем, кто не согласен
http://www.nytimes.com/2012/04/15/education/edlife/a-hazing-at-cornell.html
>Coz you are fool and such silly.
Артикль + «such silly»
>Well I'd better then ask for you
А чего «for you»?
>can you whether it translate?
«Whether» и «can» вместе не работают. И опять дополнение убежало.
>You will never can translate!
«Can» бы на «be able to» заменить.
>poesy
«poetry». Poesy дико устарело и почти не используется.
>Shut up zombie fuck off my verse!
Маты вы, похоже, не освоили.