CheekySparrow: комментарии

you consider *what* you want to do – this means he's weighing down his options

делает удар – should be нанес

«in their element» is an idiom

give someone or something a wide berth
Fig. to keep a reasonable distance from someone or something; to steer clear (of someone or something).

typo -- «слишите»

стреляет в мужчин sounds a bit odd (leif :))

He says that the warriors are noticing that there are dangerously high numbers of dredge pursuing them

«не тупая» sounds very unelegant, she should be more sophisticated than this I believe

«already committed» here means «having already made the decision» IMO

«You would» IMO means that the bridge is not destroyed but Eyvind is asking to destroy it, hence it ought to be «Ты бы уничтожил...»

«must be with..» means «I guess you're with..»

Here «Grunt» means dredge soldier IMO

«To stare down» = To look directly and fixedly, often with a wide-eyed gaze. This probably means that Iver is looking at Rook expectantly.

kids here is a wordplay cause «kid» means a child as well as the young goat. Iver hints that by inviting the kids into the party Rook is putting them in danger of being killed («asking for a dead kids»)

«убитыми от руки» should be rephased IMO

Doesn't «Skal» mean «Cheers»? IMO here it is used in the sarcastic way

IMO «taken them» here means «defeat them»

«Stare daggers» means stare in hatred, or with contempt

«watch one's own ass» means заботиться только о себе

«right under his nose» – refers to the God's idol. The speaker talks about the treasure cart that crashed from the cliff just near the monument of God that is supposed to bring good fortune.